a moment in time k.j.t

As I waited in line I saw competitive swimmers doing freestyle.Finally my race. I had to look down when I was swimming. I felt as scared as a lady being locked in a burning hotel.                                                                                                          


I listened carefully to the people around me. My friends sounded like zombies screaming around in a bundle.

The teachers shouted go go go. They reminded me of rock bands screaming loud songs.

As I swam in the water it tasted  like pee .It reminded me of Maraitai wharf. I just wanted to win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:.The water smelt like really yucky chlorine. After the race I sat down and drew with Clayton and myself.