a moment in time l.j

As I waited I looked at Carl not swimming like me. finally it was turn I was so happy I could train a frog to do ballet, even imagine one doing it.
I jumped in the pool. It was as cold as 20 ice cubes full of snow. but I soon got over it. I heard swimmers splash their arms up and down in the pool. Kody cheered for me so did some other people. My friends yelled at themselves  like teachers screaming at me forever!
Wayne yelled "Go Go Go" and I had realised the race had begun I WAS LOSING!
I didn't know what type of swimming to do, so i ran! soon I finished I came second.
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